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The most important quality I can contribute to Bryn Mawr is my determination. I have the ability to set a goal and then focus on achieving it, since I believe that all achievements are mostly a matter of willpower. Other qualities include my open-mindedness. I love to hear fresh points of view on topics of all kinds, and compare them with my own. This is one reason that I love being on the debate team at my school: I gather all possible arguments for one side of an issue, only to have an argument completely invalidated by an opponent because of his or her different definition of a word. Since I like to hear all of these different perspectives, I am good at finding them, so I would bring new viewpoints to the college both during cles and during normal conversations. I have a strong desire to promote fairness in wherever I am, which is why I want to pursue a career in law. One last thing I can contribute is a sense of leadership, which I have acquired from a combination of being a camp counselor, participating in Girl Scouts, and being Vice President of Art Club. This combination of determination, open-mindedness, and optimism makes me a good candidate for Bryn Mawr.